Not even a single chance

by krissa   May 8, 2008


I wish i can hold on to your heart..
but you never gave me a chance..
in return, you throw my hand away
and gave it to someone else..

i wish i can be your world..
but you never gave me a chance,
in return, you ignore me
and share your world with her..

i wish i can depend on you..
but you never gave me a chance..
in return, you turn back running away
and care for someone else..

i wish i didn't love you
but i just can't let go,
in return, im here alone, broken..
and i just can't love someone else..

i always wished.. but you didn't gave me even a single chance..

(pls. rate it and give it a comment thx..)

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  • 17 years ago

    by withlove

    I really like it
    i just think it might flow better if the fourth stanza follows the same pattern as the first 3?i dunno maybe that compromises the feeling you were going for
    just a suggestion
    good job 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Arnold

    Ganda naman. bigo sa pag-ibig? hehehehe. tau lang ata taga phils dito ha? hehehe.. nice kept in touch

  • 17 years ago

    by Andy

    Really really good poem!
    good use of words too :)
    5 from me :)!

  • 17 years ago

    by krissa

    Pls. rate and comment my poem..
    thx..

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