Beautifully written. i couldnt have said it better myself. great poem. i love it. 5/5

WOW! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, GOOD JOB. :)

Beautiful poem!! Absolutely stunning!!!

Well written & beautifully penned..I loved it, Keep it up 5/5

Its lovely, but I wonder whether u hav written 'thought' or 'though'. No probs its lovely.

Great poem!

Excellent poem. Your writing reminds me of mine, mostly I write hate or love, there is rarely a medium between the two other than sorrow. This poem had a few grammatical errors, try reading it slowly and you'll catch them. Keep it up. (5/5)

"Are" in the 4th line of the 2nd stanza should be "Our" I think :) hmm, 3rd lind 3rd stanza "now" should be "no" and first line 4th stanza "me heaven" should be "me of heaven. Other then that it is truely a great poem with a great flow. 4/5

Very beautiful poem and easy to read :)

my favorite stanzas was:

Without that beautiful smile
I'd become lost within madness
With now way to dry my tears
Its feeding something more then sadness
/../
It is your lips so full of passion
That drives my lovely ambition
For I know you know all of this
But kissing you is thy addiction

its really well written :) and reminds me...some things

This poem was very well-written and had a great concept. The only thing was the grammar, some of it could be improved. Otherwise I loved reading this poem!

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

That was the way i felt with my sweet s n' s TP

GR8 JOB KEEP IT ^

So romantic..nice job..