Freedom

by Pink Romance   May 8, 2008


I wanna have fun and
see the world. get out
the house and hang out by
the pools.

many people worry
about what might happen.
part of responsibility
is failure.

i have been held back too long.
going to school and
straight back home.
friends ask me to go to
the movies with them and
i say it fine by me,
but first i have to get
the okay from my oldest sister

some days i wanna just
run to the end of time
and just stay out late
making up for all the
time i have wasted.

i feel like this bird captured
and thrown in a cage,
each day i act like i am
having the time of my life.
but really i just want to escape.

my passion is to see the
sky chill out in the sun.
i tell people i am out going
and funny, but how will i ever
show them when there is
chains on my ankles.
yanking me back to
this boring life?

with out laughter i die slowly,
and without air my soul becomes sore.
so either way the only treatment
is let me ''free.''

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  • 15 years ago

    by DeepLife

    I love it!
    I feel totally like that...it freakin sucks!
    awesome poem anyhow!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Wow. I really can connect to you with this one. Thats how it is at my house everyday I go to school and straight back home again. Its rare when I can get out. I am 18 but my parents say I live in there house and I have to do what they say. Can't wait for summer. I'm leaving. I can't stand it no more. Specially cuz now they want me to pay them. Very nice job love the poem 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Wow. I really can connect to you with this one. Thats how it is at my house everyday I go to school and straight back home again. Its rare when I can get out. I am 18 but my parents say I live in there house and I have to do what they say. Can't wait for summer. I'm leaving. I can't stand it no more. Specially cuz now they want me to pay them. Very nice job love the poem 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    I guess we all feel this way sometimes. Good job. And thanks for the comment. =]

  • 15 years ago

    by fakesmile

    I love love love diz part of da poem..

    "i feel like this bird captured
    and thrown in a cage,
    each day i act like i am
    having the time of my life.
    but really i just want to escape"

    5/5 great amazing most wonderful poem..

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