Your such a great poet.This poem was so deep and full of emotion...I believe ;) 5/5

Do you believe in soul mates?
- Good opener, it puts the reader in a good atmosphere.

You are what gets me through my day,
You are the reason my blood runs through my veins.
- I can sense that you really love this person (If there is a person)

They come from my heart,
- They come from (the bottom of my) heart,
^ I believe that will greatly enhance that line.

With each passing beat a new word arises.
- Excellent line!

Emotion is what I (learn).
- learned.

Just believe.
- Please just believe in me.
^ Once again I believe that will enchance that line.

Anyway it was a very good poem, Flow went well, good job.

Btw thanks for the comment on my poem, I really appreciated it! That was one of the best comment on my poem. Thanks again!

Wow this one is good too. i love it one.

I believe you are right

Do you believe in soul mates?
yes, i do indeed.

Do you believe that people can disappear in the blink of an eye?

they can yes but they never disappear from your heart or mind.

You are what I believe in,
Everything that you are is what I love.
Everything that you can be is what I long for.

and this sounds like a good soulmate that will be true.

You are what most can only think of,
Your emotion is special to those who seek it.
You are what gets me through my day,
You are the reason my blood runs through my veins.

very good bond between these two people, this is expressed well.

I believe in you,
And I hope you believe in me.
These emotions that I show to you are true,
They come from my heart,
With each passing beat a new word arises.

thats really good language use. well done.

Poetry is what I know,
Emotion is what I learn.
You are what I love.
And I shall love you forever,
Just believe.

this is excellent, well done.

i liked this one and its very well put together, your last line being just believe is very powerful. great ending to a great poem, well done xx

Waa!!!!!!!!!!!!! more tears!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep it up gud start!

Too many I's my's me's my's. Meaningful sentiment but you could have structured the poem much better and not used all the filler words. I don't think it is good enough for the front page.

Mm i dopnt know if youa re trying to make your self beleve in that ro make him beleve in that!!

the poem need rhyming and the stanzaz are difnre in line lengh mmm but over all
goo expression sjut i dont like the flow and the way you state the feelings

i gues it can be way more better

when you speak of love ,love can make you say the most beautifull poetry with no effort

jsut elt is flow in you !!!

keep up

Awesome job i liked this one alot! these words are very true keep it up! :-)