Just no one

by Ash   May 9, 2008


It's broken pieces upon which to stare,
all was good and fine till you spat upon my care.
These tears are not just the pain now felt,
but submission to defeat as destiny would melt.

Forged a world with you alone,
this cold haunted the thoughts that moan.
Swept along deserted planes so dark,
refined memories radiating a mark.

Living each day with your memories well kept,
the harsher reality of rejection to accept.
Countless tears so sublime,
heartache and pain growing in the mind.

Falsehood now reveals what was long dead,
from the start realization should have been spread.
If only the truth could earlier be read,
than this confusion and illusions roaming freely in my head.

What was I?
Were all your words such a lie?
All those "I love you's" and times that I felt alive,
Was it a road to insanity that you wanted me to drive?

Even these tears beckon the submissive way,
of lies that left me wandering along the wrong path - always astray.
Thinking that I belong - that I'm someone,
But I guess the truth is that I'm really no one.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aryaan

    This poem is really good. Some lines are very captivating. Good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    As karan put it you are the best poet of todays age truely i pail in comparision to you but you are not no one you are someone and i still care about you though your tears beckon submissmive ways never let yourself down for ppl care and want to help truely a grandeur of a poem great work 100/5

    best wishes Mike

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Wonderful love poem though itz d sad version of love...... u have done it brilliantly.. n u r a master of not only dark poems... but poems of every calibre...

    keep it up ash,

    Best wishes,

    Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Oh my God! This was so awesome! It had me thinking about how I felt when I was in this position. Great vocabulary btw. It made the poem that much better.

    Living each day with your memories well kept,
    the harsher reality of rejection to accept.
    Countless tears so sublime,
    heartache and pain growing in the mind.

    ^^^THis has got to be my favorite stanza. It was superb. Way to go! thnx for the comment earlier btw. Rejection is hard to accpet. beautiful flow. One of your bests.
    your friend,
    ~Forever Broken~

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