Black

by Nathanilliam   May 9, 2008


The dark hole that is my heart
is sending me into a catatonic state.
A world that was bright,
full of yellows and greens
reds and blues,
has turned to black and gray.
Your words, once music to my ears,
have amputated my heart,
ripped my soul.
No more games of footsies,
no more soft words.
My world,
is black.

wrote it in english cause my teacher made me. let me know what you think.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Good job....I liked the way u wrote it..keep it up5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    I loved the colors , black but then u talk about white.
    contraste loved it

    oooo dark hi hi n_n
    keep writing !!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Tori

    I like,no wait, I love it.
    Its really well written.
    Imma go read more of your poems.

    -Tori
    ♥

  • 15 years ago

    by Just a Gurl

    You know how I feel about ur poetry check out my new poems

  • 15 years ago

    by desiring love

    I love it!

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