Young lovers

by killerdon   May 10, 2008


Your the only girl i have ever love
when i see you in that sun light
with your nice eyes and smile
but it not the same any more
this is not love, real love, young love
we being two lover for time under trees
kissing we have our laughter
but one day that would all have to end

love is like life their is a start and a end I'm afraid this is the end............

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Hun it sounds good but it does need some work not all is great but if you re-read it make some new changes like commas and make it make more since it will be amazing. and remember that if you love this girl and you like other girls to dont tell her that cause it could mess things up!

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