by killerdon May 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
In the back of your heart something is happing |
by Hollywood
Thats alot better lol i liked it good job |
by Hollywood
I liked this though it sounds like it is ment to be a sad heart wrenching one. but it does not capture my attention very well i mean it was good but if you used more eye capturing words and make me as the reader feel it then that would be amazing make me feel like your talking to me! |