With you

by tristan   May 11, 2008


When i was with you everything went well.
now I'm without you nothing goes wright.
when i was with you i felt whole.
now I'm without you i feel empty.
when i was with you your smile would keep me warm.
now I'm without you I'm always cold.
when i was with you i was a better person.
now I'm without you I'm a demon.
when i was with you i had everything but gave it to you.
now I'm without you i have nothing.
when i was with you i wished the day would never end.
now I'm without you i wish for yesterday.
Your all i want.
but your the only thing i cant have

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  • 15 years ago

    by Alexis

    Aww. ...
    this pretty much describes everything I am feeling right now.
    ....
    I love it.
    ...
    its amazing.
    Good job :]
    By the way, Im sorry....
    its terrible to feel this way .

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX

    Sad love......I felt it through your descriptive choice of words....great job with this one...keep writing! ^_^

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