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by Cyma Khan May 12, 2008
Love, romance /
How can one see,
when there isn't a hope to see
How can one's heart glow
when there isn't a desire to love
How can one's mind resist
when there isn't a courage to stress
How can one's step tumbles
when there isn't a path to follow
How can one love
when there isn't a fear to loose.
by waiting 4 some1
Hey, good poem sis
i liked the title too
i think it will look more beatufil if you added few more lines...not too much just few more
but overall it was a good poem espcially the last line
by Saravana Kumar S
Nice poem....take care and keep smiling always...
Very well written sad love poem... this poem realy so deep... it was short thoug but it was so well written.. and true feelings towards the love ones..
great workk you got 5
by Prasad B
How can one... when
Cuz "when" itself says there is a hope...
Lovely poem Cyma...
Good 2 read a poem from u always...
Keep up d good work..
best wishz... Karan