Such a dramatically powerful write. I know how this feels when two hearts part. Why? This is clearly described in this line 'All for the reason of having no reason..' This is unique - well done!

This is another great line: I shed a thousand tears drowned in blood in a sacrifice for your return..
^ unique in its layout and so fresh to my eyes.

A good write 5/5

Michael

This poem is so tru in all it's aspects... good work my fren..

keep writing,

best wishz,

Karan

Wow this is really good

I love all your poems keep up all the hard work cant wait to read more :)...
kailaxx

This is really good...you touched me....keep writing great poetry

Too many I's and you's...

^My restless heart is in agony,
I feel alike man with no shadow,
Alike a man with a heart that screams from inside..^

There is no need for the punctuation. and when you say alike that is not proper grammar. I think you mean like and in that case you should never use like in a poem rather use as.

You had emotion, you just did not put it together well. Not deserving of the front page but you get an e for effort.

Wow ! amazing, captivating, and wonderful poem...well written & beautifully penned 5/5 keep it up

Amazing...wonderful u have done yet another great poem...i would love to wrrite with such feeling as you do
keep up the great work!!
never stop writing
tk care
bree

plz read and comment on some of my poems...
tk caare
bree

Nice poem.. i realli like it.. nice work