Smear.

by Sean   May 13, 2008


This painting like a poem, blank.
jagged, coarse paper. meaningful in every shade.
There would be red,
you'll be a streak -
of black, on a cream pallet.
you'll be a reminder, i am the bristles.
controller, i push you, slam you on the page,
everywhere.
There will be white, her. Washing you out.
and there will be red - this conversation.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Hmm this was very interesting I dont think iv'e read a poem with quite the same context before =]
    Again your wording was brilliant and even though the poem was short it was a very original and refreshing read.
    The only one little thing you could do to make it perfect would be to capitalize the i's (I)
    Again excellent job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats very deep well done x

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