That is amazing i like how you made every other line rhyme and you used simple words to get your poing across and when its read you can feel the pain and hurt it totally describes what ive been going through for a while now... 5 outta 5

I CAN REALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM...

I Love this poem
I fell in love line after line...
I relate to this..it hurts so much
This is Beautiful 5/5

Nice poem....
Read my peom "Child Beggar Noshi"
Rate and comment it,to let me know how you took it while reading

I so so feel this, it does ease I promise.

It never goes but it does ease

Hugs