In The Rain

by smile or die trying   May 14, 2008


We are standing in the rain
I tell him i love him but do he really feel the same
As the rain stops the tears start to fall down my cheek
as he tell me he dint think this was meant to be
I stand there as he walk away for i have nothing else to say i think to myself how could this happen to a girl so sweet as i fall to my knees i really realize this wasn't meant to be

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  • 17 years ago

    by J u l e s

    This is a good poem, sad yet good.
    reading it had a little picture playing in my head of that really happening to a girl.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    I liked good job , i can totally relate

  • 17 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    Nice poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I liked this one hun well done x

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