hard hitting, hit the fcuker back for me will ya ;-)

hey very nice poem!!! and very sad. be strong!

Love the internal rhyming throughout it... very sad :( though very well written!

Awww! =[ that was so sad! i loved it though, it was very well written indeed. keep it up!

great poem very sad, but well written..keep ya head up..and keep up you great poems!! :) take care.

very sad i no how u feel if u wana its_always_best_To_Smile@hotmail.com thats my addy xx

Aww:( You are such a great writer, I am going to add you to my favorites. I love your poems, they are awesome. Another great job gurlie

wow.. i love it..5/5

take care,
much love,
shannon