Rebellion walls

by Ares   May 15, 2008


I stare at the wall,
meanlingless without,
boundries to restrain.

an empty bottle with,
bacteria ready to infect.
is this the world we live in?

because in every headline,
we're encouraged to hate,
those who oppose the fake.

I keep staring at the wall,
because doing something,
that makes sense,
would be written off as,
dumb rebellion actions.

so staring at the wall,
might not be as dumb,
after all.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was very unique and thought provoking and it holds a truth to it that most poems are lacking. It's obvious your writing comes from the heart and isn't forced like most poetry. I love it. Excellent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem is extradinairy, and alarmingly true.
    'because in every headline,
    we're encouraged to hate,
    those who oppose the fake.

    I keep staring at the wall,
    because doing something,
    that makes sense,
    would be written off as,
    dumb rebellion actions.'

    with these lines you have found possibly the best way to say this EVAR. You really are good...

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