OMG this is soo sad! The flow was a little off in some spots but other than that I loved it! It is really well written. Great job!
~Stefanie

Very good write
The emotion in this was one that cannot be matched. Great usage of imagery and the voice was amazing. The fact that you kept it simple yet you expressed yourself perfectly was also a plus
Overall perfectly written
5/5

It's a good write, very emotional, good imagery and word choice. however it is kind of story like, and i think a poem should be different. thats just my point of view though.

good work.

When I first "meant" you

I think you mean... "met"?

We got to know eachother....

Put space in between each and other

Your right. It is confusing.
Even the poem is... a bit too confusing.

You should use more straightforward terms.
You can be subtle without confusing your readers.

For example:
You feel something for him.

What do you feel?

Anger?
Sadness?
Constipation?

It came from a good mind.
But as you probably know, we're all learning.
We need to learn how to put not only thoughts on paper/computer, but also our feelings.

So...
I'm sorry I might not make sense to you right now.
But it'll probably come to you in a dream or something.

It always does to me. :p

Nice emotion and feeling here, you expressed yourself well- a very enjoyable love poem! In the first line meant should be met, and eachother should be spaced out. You could work on the flow in some places, But I think you did great on this, keep it up!

Omg i love it
its great,
and i love it!! :]
ive had it happen it kinda suxs
this dude and i were rlly good friends and he liked me [this was in elmentary skool] and then he moved it didnt c him 4 about 3 years and in those three years i realized i liked him well this year he came to my middle skool and he remembered me, but he gave up on me liking him and moved on, now we dnt even talk it kinda sux cuz in those 3 years i always wondered wat itd b lik to c him again and wen it didnt turn out the way i wanted it felt kinda bad
but great poem 5/5 i loved it

The simple pouring out of mixed emotions made this poem quite enjoyable

5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Wowo dat was a beautiful poem..i think u did a great job. the way u said it was amazing n sometime's some of us lose the ones we love..=] but other then dat great job..

It was an amazing piece I understood what you meant on the last few alst, very impacting.

Too many I's and filler words. Lacks structure and flow. Not deserving of the front page.

Im glad i read this one. =]
i love it, so relatable. its going on my favorits for shure. the poem is great, but the endings sad. still a great piece though.

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Nicely done.
It was kinda confusing for me though.