Great structure....good choice of words...and loved how it rhymed...it made it more fun in a serious way....(If that makes sense) Great write.........

I can really relate to this well written poem. It in fact seems strange that my fate was recorded so well by an inspired poet

The stucture as well as the flow and rhyme scheme is just outstanding

I am going to vote it into the weekly contest

The choice of words that you have made is an eye catcher.
also it evenly captures the daily mishaps / quarrels amongst a couple.

very well written .
i dint find any corrections as such.
also thanks for your inputs.

This is a really good poem....I liked the meaning and you used descriptive words..Great Job

I liked the poem. The topic of two falling in love and than discovering it doesn't work can relate to many. This poem is written in a very good structure, with decent rhymes and good choosing of words, simple but passionable. Liked it all the way through 5/5

This title truly caught my attention and made me eager to read your poem. I loved how you opened it because it was enticing and clear to understand what was going on. The imagery was great and you truly put me in the scene you created.

Oh boy did I love the ending. It was heartbreakingly beautiful to read of a love that turned out not to be real. Thats a scary thought to have and you described it flawlessly.

Well done *5/5*