Very good, I like the way you kept the endings ee,yy and so on. It's an emotional poem, 10/10.

I loved this poem I love the rhyming and it was soo powerful!!!!!!

This is really amazing.
I loved the rhyming.
I loved the whole concept of it.
Your an amazing writer =]
xx

This is an amazing write
I could feel ur emotion
great job

You have really good writing two.
i like your poems alot.

Wow...that is very well writte and i love how it rhyms...(i like rhyming poems i think they sound or flow together better...i just have a problem with the rhyming part{lol}) but very good great poem!! there was a lot of emotion put into it...5/5

Awe! such a sad poem! but its really good!! : )

WOW.....THAT WAS GREAT.....

There it is ..
the perfect poem to remind anyone of their past ..

It has alot of feelings .. all mixed up, packed, signed and sealed ... a poignant , smooth flowing write .. i liked how it turned in the middle yet took the feelings with it ..

"..if i love you then you will know
if you love me then let me go.."

... it would pain to be on the recieving end .. u make the reader feeel.. which is great art.
AMAZING *_* =D

~Wake~

OMG!!! i love this!
its so sad but really really good :]

This is a very sad poem....I really liked it though because thats the way I have been feeling lately...Great Work 5/5

This is perfect ai really enjoy ur poems but this is very strong... and sad.. i felt identify by this poem.. cuz... i've been trough struggle latley.. u shoul read my latest poem and ull see.!

I really love this poem.... it reminds me of some of my writing.
you have a lot of talent.
but, i hope it's not true. believe me, i know how dark it can get, and i understand only too well how hard it is to hold on....
but, you can do it.
just remember, if you can get through it, then it will make you stronger.
i know you can do it.
i believe in you.

I really love this poem.....
it reminds me of my life, I can relate to it alot 5/5

Sooo sad but beautiful, you can really feel the pain this describes, this is definantly one of those better poems i've read, i loved it.

Think its time for me to leave
happiness is too hard to believe
everything i touch gets taken away
people i love are hurting everyday

^^ suicide and self harm would only hurt them more, darling.

this poem is very sad, simple...wonderfully done. I hope...I hope everything works out...*hugs*

great job.

I like this one

**i think its time for me to leave
happiness is too hard to believe**
i really liked th

**i think its time for me to leave
happiness is too hard to believe**
i really liked that part. well the whole poem was very good. n_n
and its probably a feeling that a lot of people have. 5/5 ^^

[ack srry , lol erase the first. i misstyped n it sended O_o' thats what you get for being on the computer in the early morning lol =P]
can't wait for the next poem =D

Im not letting you go anywhere:)
i liked it, but i didnt agree with the end part
sorry:)
it was a very good poem, but the fact that they love, means they wont let you go
and i'll cut the crap now:)