My Heart Will Always Be Yours

This is pretty good, but I felt like you could add a lot more into it, and it really didn't caputre my attention that well. But otherwise what you have so far, I like.

"How I can not tell you â??I love youâ?? to your face"

First, get rid of that a?? thingy^.
I hate when that happens! :)
And a question mark is needed at the end.

Keep writing, always and forever.....