MY bf

by peaunt   May 19, 2008


When i look in to ur eyes.they are like a flower in the sun.When i look at u i hope u love me too.ME and u are like fish in water.I love u aways.

this is not done but it is to my lover chris

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ashley

    Check the flow, its very choppy. Also spell check it, ur is not a word. One out of five

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashley

    Must be spell checked. Please do not use abbreviations such as ur for your. And you have to review the poem to make it make sense

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