This is an excellent poem. very deep and it keeps me thinking thats what i like about it. lol you have excellent questions and if i didn't experience them you make me want to keep writing.

Excellent poem thank u for your comment on "Suicide note"

Interesting concept. seeing yourself from a 3rd person view or in a mirror or out-of-body type experience. very intrieging indeed. made me think of a song by Switchfoot called "This is your life". the lyrics go "This is your life, are you who you want to be?"

when you see yourself, are you pleased or disgused? just need to learn to accept yourself.

I kinda got a spiritual revalation by reading this one. (even if its totally wrong :P)

Thanks for posting ^_^

I like this because
You speaking to the readers
and yet your writing down how
you feel!
5/5

Extremely interesting concept. You took this piece to the extreme, and you developed it into something beautiful. Written for us to understand you expressed what half the world truly is. This is magnificent.

♥Excellent Emotions
♥Fully Understandable
♥Outstanding Vocabulary
♥Wonderful Mind Set

5/5

A brilliant poem, and so well expressed, lol. Have felt this way at times, and its unreal! And your right, we each have to "find" ourselves and what we want in life...not run away. Excellent reading..loved it.