This is a really beautiful poem. sad, but beautiful. 5/5!!! :)

This is a great poem. i love how thee words flow, it all sounds so natural. even though very sad, it still deserves a 5/5.

I'm pretty much addicted to how sweet your poems are, my dear...maybe because i can pretend for a minute...no. anyway. this was very sweet and simple. i really enjoyed the rhyming scheme as it was unobtrusive and just helped the poem along rather than dominating it.

great job

Wow !! this is really nice. You've done a great job with this poem and with the rhyming and usage of words.
I loved the last part , its so sad yet so sweet.

"And the day i die
far far above
ill paint a heart, to express our love
only if you ever bothered to look to the sky"

Wow..this is really good! It takes a man to write something like this. Thats awesom. I love this poem! Great stuff..5/5