Oh Sweet Illusion, Oh Simple Pretend

It`s amazing . i totally love it
i love the word illusion coz i live inside it for a long time :)
great writing

Hey, jesse.
OMG, i loved it.
I can totally FEEL the poem.
It's so mystical, yet i totally believe this is a down-to-earth situation.
I love your poems!
Keep writing them,
and I hope you write one for me! :P

Wow..Amazing...My Favorite Stanza Was The First One The Minute I Read It I Was Alreadii Amazed...And What You Saiid Bout Happiness Is So True...I Can Relate To This Poem A lot...Great Writing...

Very very beautiful, I think I'll put

Oh sweet illusion
Just one more shot
Make my heart believe
What my head can not

this in my nickname, hoping my illusion might come true, even though it is probably an illusion he might even look at my nickname :p

An illusion can sometimes be the only thing that keeps you standing in times of despair, when hope is all you got. Knowing this will pass, holding on to the illusion can be a way to make things easier, as long as it doesn't get obsessive

So great, so true. 5 Stars.