"Bloody, gauged hearts break
shatter, glittering on the pavement of a chest
telephones scream through the silence
and still the angesl are unheard"
-That was my favorite stanza, showing how horrible a broken heart can be. There was a spelling error, I know you probably know but I just would like to tell you in case. 5/5

Bloody, gauged hearts break
shatter, glittering on the pavement of a chest
telephones scream through the silence
and still the angesl are unheard
--fav. part
used good words

Gabby.......this is in my opinion your best work........the line...

thump thump gushes the dying heart

god that says everything...You always did know how to make me wonder......luv ya......xoxoxoxoxo

I really enjoyed this one as well, another 5.

Very well written... loved the way u have weaved your thoughts here! keep it up!

Love it absolutely....keep it up !