Most def. a 5 /5 So many of us can relate
to this f**k up life we create for ourselves
It starts out so nice like looking for heaven
then It becomes like a DARKSIDE a place
where nothing is normal anymore its call
ADDICTION and if you don't want to waste
your whole life in it then get the f**k out
NOWWWWWWWWWW today this min. this second don't pick up one ounce of alcohol
not one puff of weed no pills no nothing
handle your problems with a clear head
and most of all DON'T HOLD ONTO BAD
S**T IN YOUR HEAD LIKE ITS SOMETHING SPECIAL LET THAT S**T GO. This is coming
from someone who wasted 20 years of his
life and you can't replace the life you waste

I really loved the points that this poem brought forth and portrayed, and the inner struggle it personified, but would have liked to see a little better flow. Keep up the good work!

Good job touches home written similar poems in the past