I like the idea behind the piece but i know you can use alot more imigination with this peice hun other then then that-
Raindrops 4/5

Interesting and unique..
good piece...

maybe not so much of "THE RAIN" after a stanza.. .. just to keep it flowing a lil better..

but other than that...
nice..

Good job. love the concept of the rain. maybe add some more detail but then again it might not need it.=]

great job.