She Tortures Herself

I love this. truly loved it. there was one error that i did notice..

"she looks at the pictures
she looks t the words"

i think you meant she looks (a)t the words =]

this also can be transformed, in my belief, into a very beautiful and indepth piece. just add a little more details and depth and it'll be an amazing piece.

but i also do adore the simplicity of this. sometimes less is better. i can see exactly were you are coming from.. keep up the good work =]

I enjoyed it quite a bit. Work on the depth and you'd have a masterpiece!! haha

I liked it. maybe a little more depth. but overall, very good.
-- aprils conspiracy

I enjoyed it. I really did. You might want to try to expand it, it seemed a little emprty. Im not much of a writer, so don't take this the wrong way!