This poem is really good it made me cry :[ it was really touching it made me feel wat i had felt for a while now this reminded me of my ex bf =\ & i feel jus that way.. being scared of seeing him again one day & wat would happen
You should tell him how you feel! even if you dont think he feels the same you never know plus its better to get it off your chest and who knows maybe if you tell him he will feel the same way it might be hard to do but its the right thing to do everything you want to happen might but it also might not you never know untill you try! and this poem is amazing
My friend/lover just moved away to SC and I'll never be able to see him again. I loved this poem; it made me think of him and it expresses the emotion of never seeing him again so beautifully. I loved it! 5/5
I can totally understand this and it was beautiful!
I had my last day of skewl taking exams in the same class as my crush, and then being two tables away from him, and watching him sitting there with his friends hurt me so much. Then I remembered that I wouldn't see him till August either. It hurt.
You wrote it so well, and I thnk you should get a 5/5. gr8 job
Omg this is such a sad poem because you seem so nice and you are so talented...i cant think of why a guy would'nt want you..I can't think of anything wrong with this because it is a perfect poem.
Looking back on everything,
I still remember his smile.
I wish things didn't end so soon,
And turn back time for awhile.
^^Omg this is so honest and so sad. I think almost everyone has felt this way and it really sucks.. ad I just LOVE the way you wrote about it. ^^
No matter how much it hurts,
I still love him so.
A part of me needs him so much,
Can't seem to let him go.
^^Ugh I can't get over how much emotion is exposed in this poem and it just keeps getting deeper!^^
Knowing I won't be able to see him,
Makes my heart cry out in pain.
I can't believe we won't talk anymore,
The thought makes me wanna go insane.
^^The flow in this line is amazingly perfect^^
He was my reason for waking up,
For the smile you see on my face.
Going a single day without him,
Makes me feel so out of place.
^^ THE STANZA IS AMAZING IN THIS LINE^
I was afraid of opening up,
Now I'm afraid of the next day.
Whenever I see him one last time,
I'm terrified of what he may say.
^^ Omg I can totally relate to everything you say in this line...once again..amazing stanza!^^
I know tomorrow will hurt,
But the tears will fade away.
Life is too short for regrets,
There will be a brighter day.
^^This is a very important line because its so intense and meaningful!^^
But when I see him one last time,
I won't know what to do...
When he tells me that last goodbye,
I'll whisper,"I already miss you.."
^^ wow that took my breath away..that was an amazing poem..youre going on my favorites list..lol^^ btw thank you so much for the amazing comments on my poems! once again..AMAZING POEM!
Aww, this is such a cute poem -- I truly adored it.
What I really like about it is that it combines a younger-felt topic (a crush) with an older topic (loneliness, etc). It's just so great and really caught my attention.
I love this poem. I dedicated it to my friend Ray if you dont mind. I lost him but not until school starts... I lost him for good. =(. *TEAR*. I wish i could have him as my best friend again. He was one i NEVER wanted to lose, but we parted last week. Your poem i can relate to very much. Great job 5/5
That is sooo sad...I really like how it is written
11 years ago
Exceptional poem indeed. no wonder you say it is your favorit. Just as Mirror, Mirror is my favorit one of mine, I have to say that this poem is worth the nomination it recieved. I semce you can do much better, but that is just one poet to another. All together, I am glad to be able to put a 5/5 on this poem, and not lie about it, as I do for the lower poets to boost there confident. Keep up the great work, and I hope to read more of the same in the future.
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