Wow, this is reallly amazing! I could really see this becoming a famous song, the words were just so perfect and it went together so nicely, by the way, love the chorus!

Very good work!! normally i at least need a beat ta sing but i was able to sing this song good job!! *thumbs up* =D

I like this song better than *punk rock princess,* lyrically. It seems to flow better. Nevertheless, I like both songs. Hope to hear one of them.

Great job, Thanks.

That was so beautifully written..! And you captured so much emotion with those lyrics... Wonderful work, keep it up!
A 5/5, definitely :)
Take care,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Relli gd song, i cn relte to this aswell i lyk the line 'to long I've been here waiting
just to live through another heartbreaking', was writtn with a lot of emotion, leep up the good work =] 5/5 xx

BEAUTIFUL

That is really good!!!

Great. I'd like to hear this in an actual song

I think it would sound good to some rock and roll music. I liked it with the exception of this line:
^ready for a tidal wave^

It seems to throw the flow off. Of course I have my own tune in my head.....

Wow this song is great im sure ill see one of your songs on charts in the next few years!

Awww that should be sung by some famous singer someday!! Great lyrics.. =)

Have you actually sung this, or given it to someone to sin for you. this is good.
take care .x.stace.x.

I didn't really get this song, some parts of the song sounded cheesy and some were good.

overall i thought it was ok, but try not to use too much repetition in a song because it makes it boring, hope that helps :)