Victim of broken love

by ECILA ice   May 24, 2008


Another victory for a fraud angel
One meek prey had fallen
To its unperceivable trap

One huge celebration
Will be held again
At the vacant temple

Sacrificing one meek heart
Throwing it to the blazing pyre
Offering it to the god of broken love

**this is an old piece.. A story of a woman who have been decieved by a man, making her believe that he loves her so much.

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  • 12 years ago

    by NOTWORTHLIVING

    Tht was fantastic emotions burned in the words i could feel feel the sadness eminating as i read it brought bck good an bad memories very strong word choice

  • 12 years ago

    by NOTWORTHLIVING

    Tht was fantastic emotions burned in the words i could feel feel the sadness eminating as i read it brought bck good an bad memories very strong word choice

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    Horrible situation
    good word choice
    short but had so much meaning
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    Wow! That was soo beautiful. I loved it and it is about my favorite subject - Deception. I don't know why it is; you can just write so many good poems about this subject, right?! And everyone can relate to them. So good job on this one!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by noha

    This poem touch my heart and you write it in a way makes me watch everything and i realy hate this man,nice flow and simple words,well done5/5

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