What Were You Thinking?

by Dying Beautifully   May 24, 2008


What were you thinking when I said no?
How did it feel to know I had to go?
Would it have helped if I had explained?
But in reality it was I who felt ashamed.

Did you realize what I was going through?
Maybe if you did you'd know I was always true.
What more can I say to make it better?
All I had wanted was to be yours forever.

What were you thinking?
I've moved on?
I'm still sinking.
I'm still awaiting dawn.

How could you think I don't love you?
How is it I write and it's true?
I want you to feel how I am right now,
And trust me you would if I knew how.

I can't move on in my head I'm still with you.
You may not understand that but it's true.
I don't know what to say as the keyboards plinking.
Except what were you thinking?

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  • 15 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    This was great, it had a good flow, but may i suggest a fwe things..

    *How did it feel to know I had to go?*
    This line was good but i think if you add THAT between know and I then it would flow a little better.

    *How could you think i dont love you?*
    And the same with this line THAT between think and I or you could rite..
    *How could you think that i didnt love you?*

    JUst my opinion, other then that its great. Well done.

    Keep it up!
    *Hunny*

  • 15 years ago

    by love09 4ever

    I love this poem cuz i kno its true something about is related to my life!!!

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