by Katrina Reyes May 26, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Days and days go bye |
by claire
Cool poem - it starts out strong, and i really like the etch-a-sketch metaphor, but did you mean "days and days go BY" and "IT"S not an etch-a-sketch"? sorry i know that isnt very sophisticated critique but i think spelling can distract from the writing . . |
by TARA
I liked it.. |