Wow your express your emotions well, especially in this poem. i loved it. so sad. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Beautiful!

Wow hard sacrifice to do like this, i am speachless sometimes in these situations , dont be fustrated ,love si something , we proud of , not hide from the frineds, they are friedns if they are happy for you and supoort you , in waht make you happy

if he loved you from the frist place he will nto wory his friends saying
i thinkit is good to do like you did

for the strucutre it s good trilplet with good rhyming i can imagine the words got out naturaly
perfect one

I love the way u express your self..really good