Green covers r vanishing n mother nature is ripped apart of its flora n fauna....bit by bit... N if itz not stopped d day is not far where every species of medicine b extinct.....

This had a moral besides being d exposure of another excellent poetic form in d covers...

Good work again... keep it up...

best wishz.... Karan

Very nice Monchielle and a powerfull statement as well!
Good job!

Take care,

Ingrid

Wow i must say not everyone can get away with saying the same line over, many people make it annoying but you made it look different with your words each time nice poem 5/5

Lonely Rider
You have met this challenge with a beautiful constructed Monchielle.

Crying in solitude
Dying helpless timber
Glinting blades, iron teeth
Devoured green covers
Barren land - sandy sheet

Your imagery and word choices are awesome. What a way to get the message out how we are destroying our mother earth.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Wow, nice poem!
It's well written!
great job..!!!

hope I can do that well too..
tnx!

Wonderful monchielle! Beautiful haunting verses of nature.....thought provoking and true to the form. Well done!

This Monchielle is the first I have read. You did very well with this challenging format the natural imagery penetrated deep into my soul

Another great piece. i can feel the emotion you put into this piece. and it was a great write. and a very enjoyable read. the poem itself is outstanding, but i especially favored the ending. :] 5/5.

Usually I don't read poems in the nature cat., but this one was really good. I imagined a tractor or something destroying a rainforest. It was beautiful the way that you described everything.

Well uv got the Monchielle down to a T.
good poem with a great meaning.

Nice job!

Ah! A lot of people I know have tried writing in this format, and have failed. You, on the other hand, did an amazing job with it. I typically don't like nature poems, but this just created a beautiful image that was natural -- haunting at times, and at others, saddening and simply soothing.

Nicely done, m'dear.
..__MiNDYY

Wow a sad poem that shows the cruelty that falls in our natural lives, nice poem, the main thing i liked were the examples given and description. 5/5

Excellent poem! I had never heard of this type of poem until now! Thanks for opening my eyes to it.

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!
Ah, the emotion was so powerful and
the flow was flawless. I absolutly love this
poem. Very well done and amazing write,
there is just no other words to say.
<3Tay
5/5

An excellent piece of poetry! it flowed very well. great word use. an amazing piece of poetry 5/5

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Beatifully written

Good word choice and imagery in this piece. My only suggestion is :

^Homeless feathery lifes^ should be lives instead of lifes.

You did a great job sticking to the syllable count and following the rulesof the form. Well done!!

This is a great poem, with great structure, you didnt need to explain it though, the brilliance of it was visible in the flow. thnks for commentin me btw :)

Wow a very different piece here. I loved it and how the first lined repeated throughout. Great way to create emphasis. I loved the softness of your words and how constant the flow was. This was a wonderful piece dear. Very well done. Nik