You know i think you are a good poet i really liek this one and im very impressed on how good you did explainging your emotions.

This is an interesting poem, but seems to end a little short - maybe if you made the last line "Like you love him
And he loves you?" or just added a "?" at the end. im not sure, but the rest is good - for anyone, but especially for a 7th grade.
oh, also, i think you forgot the word tears in the the 1st line, and spelled pale p-a-i-l, like a bucket

So sad to think of just being in one place while life goes bvy you and dosn't stop to help. it kind of sucks to be that person, but what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, or does it.

"Nice write from Poetry Knight"

This waS SWEET EXCELLENT PIECE

This is a very nice poem....

keep it up

Best wishes,

Karan

Omg I love that, it reminds me of a bok i read, your soo good :P