Lost one.

by lovenote   May 28, 2008


BEFORE you read this i'm going to let you know i wrote this in 6th grade so it's a bit cheesy, :] but here you go :

It seemed like a dream,
But it was all too real.
There's not one soul that comprehends how i feel ;
And could i be lost in this misery somehow?
I'm so alone, so vulnerable, so confused right now.
And my life that i thought was so good,
how can this happen? i misunderstood.
you're gone and my soul's coming undone ;
i guess i will forever remain the lost one.

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  • 15 years ago

    by lovenote

    Wow, that's an awesome quote.
    did you make that?

  • 15 years ago

    by NuNu

    Dhisz wasz actually reallyyy qewd.
    if you love my writinqq i think you'll really like my fave quote of mine;
    __*im a tear
    ive been here before
    i know her perfumed fingers
    i know the cold cold floor
    every time you leave her;
    every time you dont call
    when she cant help herself
    its my job to fall .

    btw ; 5/5 :]]

  • 15 years ago

    by Ixora

    For a 6th grader this is amazing. You are very talented love keep writing <3

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