BRAVO! that was awesome. the words and the rhyming was excellent. loved the poem. keep writing.

Wow! Ur a very talented poetess.. I like this poem very much.. Keep it up 5/5

This was so heart felt...I could feel the sadness in every word you wrote down.
You did a very good job in portraying your feelings!
Well written too:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Short but so heart felt. your rhyming was really great and i could feel your own emotion put inside your words

great job

5/5