"The sound of rain on the roof, caressing you to sleep. I picture drops of rain, dropping in puddles, creating ripples that peacefully, yet eratically scatter away from ground zero. The rain, falling on your head, and on your shoulders. Trailing down your face, running into your lips, like tears, tasteless tears."
I love how you describe rain, and it running into your lips and everything. That just was perfect to put in the poem! Nice job saying the rain is like tasteless tears......great simile! Nice job throughout the poem, enjoyed it very much as others probably did too. Keep writing, never give it up! :)
Who knew that something so simple and unappreciated could turn into the magnificant and loved... Amazingly well written poem!! I have only so far have read one of your poems and i already know that all them are going to be amazing......keep writng please!
The rain is one of my favorite times for me to write poems. like you said "So many thoughts just from falling water." the third stanza was my favorite. i sometimes think like that when i hurt...anyway grat work!!!!!!!!!!!!
11 years ago
Awrsome piece so flat out yet interesting. Great job...