Oh wow.

David this is just beautiful, so heartfelt and emotional.

Awww
the whole thing was so powerful, from beginning to end. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time waiting to see how it ended. awesome awesome awesome write!

-He rings your phone so late at night,
What a suprise his drunk again.
But all he wants is your loving touch,
As he tries so hard to explain.-

I love this verse as it has me written all over...just switch the gender around. I drink to have the courage to say how I feel and love the way you wrote it.

-So now it's over and you move on,
And he tell's you it's for the best.
He lies between his teeth for you,
Not showing you his depressed.-

This is also one I can relate to....You want the best for the other person so you hide your real feelings.

Very well written. Loved it!

This is an amazing poem and if everybody who reads it is not touched then soemthing is wrong with them. It shows such deep emotion and pain, which makes it one of your best poems.
A straight 5/5!!

Awwww this poem stole my heart its breath taking! i love emotional poems like this!!!! 5/5