Love how i hate its pain that is usually brought. I liked your poem, it flowed quite nicely, showed emotions that were deep.4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Wow! beautifully written!
5/5

Very good! keep it up!

Okay, so chances are I didn't get exactly the right meaning you wanted from it; however, the meaning I did get was really thought provoking. The pain in the healing, the healing in the pain. "follow you to death"<- I love how you ended it.
I didn't see a whole lot of emotion in it, but that's because to me, it was as if it was the emotion itself speaking to me. So I didn't feel what it was saying, I heard what it was telling me. Which is even better. It's almost warped in my head.
I'm sorry if that's not what you wanted from this poem, but it's almost a good thing if it's not. If it is, then you achieved what you were shooting for, if it's not than it means it's open to your reader's interpretation - which makes reading that much more and involving.
You should definately be proud of this one. I'm not a big fan of cutting, or anything to do with it...but this was really well done.

I've read it about four times and I still feel there is something else hidden in that poem, in those deep lines... Definitely it was a profound write, and it can suggest so many things... However, one thing was all clear, the emotion, the feeling it portrayed: loneliness, exasperation, harrowing frustration, the inevitable permanent companion, surrounding shadow, pain. Well, it was an excellent write, not dark actually, but really heartbreaking. Keep it up! 5/5

Btw, I loved the repetition ' I am.. ' ^^. Wonderful job!

Take care,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Wow amazing poem very well written and i loved every word!

Awesome!!...actually it was too hard to choose which stanza I liked the most in ur poem becoz the whole poem is so nice...but the part that touched me the most was
I am the shadow watching over you
The mistakes you commit
I am the only to be counted on
Believe me my love, I'd never be untrue
U r talented..keep it up5/5
thx fr ur comment on my poem..

Amazing !! simply amazing. This poem is def. one of my favorites.
My favorite part was this

"I am the flowering guilt you dread
The unforgivable choice you took
I am the love you murdered
Let your tears fall as I spread"

5/5

Nicely written.....You could really picture what was happening. I loved the choice of words. Good work!