Comments : First look, First touch, First kiss

  • 19 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    All of your work is magnificent. They're short but length holds no boundaries. All that matters is the feeling that it emits. Thank you for reading my work as well.

  • I read this one second. I must say though, I liked the Dark Angel better than this one. I guess for me to really enjoy love poems, they need a lot of symbolism and not just the obvious. Still, it was good in its own right. Again I thank you for checking out my poems, I look forward to reading more of your postings.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    Very cool idea for starting and ending a poem. I like this alot. I'll have to try that someday. Nice write;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful, another awesome poem. Great job. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    awsome poem

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hello, this was great! i figured i should read back to some of your older poems. i wasn't at all dissapointed.

    well done and great work.

    -Suzie