The Night My Love Died

by michelle   Jun 2, 2008


I watch the pieces of my heart
Float away
They broke because of you
You smashed me today

My eyes fill with tears
My smile falters
My dreams are filled
With dying altars

I feel so venerable
Open inside
I will remember this night
As the night my love died

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is pretty good, but I feel like you could put more emotion in it, and make it more interesting. I not saying I don't like it, I do, just thought there could be more feeling and stuff. Take care! :)

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