Aw i really liked this. It takes alot to write about something this sad. It hurts when our loved one passes away but remember they are still in all of your hearts so he is still with you all! Great poem though.5/5

This is so sad, it reminds me of my best friend who past away last year.
so i can tell you i kno how you feel.
nice job.
keep up the good work. 5/5.

I'm touch with ur poem.........
i really like it... this is sad but in the end i look back again it's beautiful........
well done for this one.. 5/5.