Not so true Friend

by Mallory   Jun 3, 2008


I thought you were my friend,
who would be there till the end.
I was wrong, you see.
cuz you talked about me

I hate the rhyme
but you gossiped all the time.
Talking about others too,
I don't know why I was friends with you.

I guess this is goodbye
A message before my phone dies
I thought you were true
now i wish i never met you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "I thought you were my friend,
    who would be there till the end.
    I was wrong, you see.
    cuz you talked about me"
    -Change cuz to because, Otherwise you could simply put it in the slang category. :)

    "I guess this is goodbye
    A message before my phone dies
    I thought you were true
    now i wish i never met you"
    -Capitolize i's!

    Overall, nice poem. Of course we all can relate to having a friend who wasn't as great as we thought they were in the first place. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Wow, thats how i felt with this 1 friend, nice job, 5/5

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