Nice poem, good message, but keep an eye for format, people dig perfect lines and matching syllables

your servant:
David

Aw! I really liked this one. its cute. keep it up! 5/5 luv ya!~Spiker_03~

Aw! I really liked this one. its cute. keep it up! 5/5 luv ya!~Spiker_03~

Well thats pretty cool

Cuteee

verry cleverr</33

Dont matter about the perfect, I don't 'dig' that. i wish i could've gotten my girl to write me something like this...
u must really love him. good idea

Dont matter about the perfect, I don't 'dig' that. i wish i could've gotten my girl to write me something like this...
u must really love him. good idea

Great Poem!!!
I love the way you had the names at each sen!
Really great!
5/5

Wow. That was really good. I loved it!
♥~Samantha~♥