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by alienbaby Jun 3, 2008 category : Love, romance / lasting love
Walking down the trail Next to the flowing stream We made our way through This young lover's dream The creek water flows Even and steady Pacing itself until The young lover's ready Ready to become The most beautiful bride But for now she must stay here In a dream land and hide The lover is lonely Her counter part has gone Off to fight a war That will never be won The young lover waits For Him to come back But his love, her heart Will forever lack He shall never return For he'll die in this war And from her chest, her heart She'll have tore She wont be able To withstand this pain She'll go crazy without him She'll never be sane It's better to have loved and lost Then cried and died Than to loved and lost And had to survive
by withlove
I like it nice flow it created images in my head as i read it and i really like the ending. it has a lot of power