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by Rachel RTVW Jun 5, 2008
Nature, environment /
Softly, the rain falls, nature's tears
Nurturing life as it appears
A soothing, calming, welcome sound
As pitter patters meet the ground
This melody delights my ears
Obscuring sun, grey clouds in charge
The ground to cover is quite large
Now wildflowers' drink is found
Softly, the rain falls
Although I know at shower's end
A rainbow in the sky will bend
'Tis not what I anticipate
For life anewed is surely great
Creating such a perfect blend
Softly, the rain fallsA Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows:
aabba aabR aabbaR.
Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one.
The other lines are longer (but all of the
same metrical length).
by Lucas Woods
Beautifully written. Gives me such a warm feeling.
by Robert Gardiner
by alka mendiratta
5/5.A splendid write on nature's nurturing resource.Going through each stanza ,the imagery gave a real feel.
by Roses Bleed
Wonderful language that completely conveyed a very beautiful message! loved it.
by Jyoti Rawat
NICE DESCRIPTION ABOUT RAIN