Ug. This made me think of Jake, a lot, actually. How when he hugs me i can't think straight, but it doesn't really matter to him..*shakes head*

It's wonderful, hon.

Look me in the eyes,
look deep inside,
and you'll see that they're all teary,
from staring at you so wide.

^^ that was my favorite stanza, for a few reasons. One, it was written absolutely beautifully. and two, it made me think of one time, I almost cried in front of him because he was telling me about this wonderful other girl...ug. it was painful. >.<

*hugs*
good job honey.

I love to have a great feelin lyk dat but its lost... Great writin thou!!!! Good work!!!

Aww this is a very cute..and meaningful poem! Awesome work Sophie!!! 5/5

JUST WOW

5/5
biya

Wow this was lovely.
the flow was fantastic and you spoke from your heart, very nice.

You are so perfect, I am not,
and yet I love you so.
It seems I cannot control,
my heart's unstoppable flow....

that was my favorite stanza. wonderful write. very deep. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Aww...this one is so sweet and I can tell you put alot of yourself into it. I love this poem because it shows alot of your feelings toward this person :) Great job! 895684905/5

I totally felt this poem..somehow i wanna say exactly the same to my love..sweet poem..loved it..

Good job!!!..
Let me guess, you're in the writing mood right?..
lol
It was very well written..
keep writing...5/5 ^_^

I like it its very nice
c/b