This is the first poem by you that i have ever hated.
sorry.

I disagree.

I think this is a really good poen,it's unique.

I really like your writing style and the way this poem has somewhat of a story line,it's as if you're living the cutter's life.

And it's nice to see cutting from someone else's point of view.

I don't exactly agree with your opinion,but still it's nice to see someone who can express the opinion in such a mature way.

Your poem made me think of cutting in a new way.

So,thank you.

I seriously disagree as well.

i kno ppl who cut, all the excuses they make, and i just let them do their thng. bt the way u put it, the way u said, u say the razor is the only one who cares, then y does it let u cut urself, that made me think.

i nvr sed anythng 2 them, like "dont do that" or "cum on, ur life isnt that bad" bt the way you said it, makes me wish i had.

its an amazing poem, and i thnk u did an amazing job w/ it.

gr8 job
5/5

Alright, so now that we've fought about it and I've been forced to think about it, I'll leave you a real comment.

I don't HATE this poem, Jesse.
I just know from experience that badgering a cutter and provoking them in that nasty sort of tone, they just lash back out and try to spite you.

No, you should NEVER sugar coat it. But "come on, come on"....that's ALMOST antagonistic.

Bye Bye, Dear Reader
You say you only hurt yourself
Well, blood and metal on your wrist
You don't give a fu ck about anyone else

^^ I understand where you're coming from with this stanza, Jesse. It's..interesting when you've so recently been on the cutter side and suddenly you're on the angel's side. But...I know that I cared when i did it. I know i still loved people, I still loved my friends who stood by me. So to accuse somebody that they don't care....that's actually what bothred me most about this poem, probably. Becuase, you're NOT as psychic as you think. You don't ALWAYS understand what's going on in their head.

So no, I do not know the story that goes with this. I don't know the person you're trying hard to break through to. And maybe...maybe it's just over the line in my eyes, but that's how i see it. antagonizing and bullying is how it came across to me. >.<

**but the scheme and flow was beautiful. rofl**

sorry for the two comment thing.

I'm going to say the way you worded things and everything is not unique, the fact that you didn't sugar coat things is unique. i can't tell whether or not i like this poem, it's written very well but i pretty much hate anything to do with cutting (including my own poems). i think i like this poem for a poem about cutting.

Omg this was truly amazing! It was very sad. I like it..its very intense! Awesome Job! 5/5

Well,ok
harsh, very harsh
but although i dont understand your point of view
you made it come across well
this poem made the reader feel alot of emotion, it made my heart drop at the end, it was amazing
im so sorry for what your going through jessie
*hugs*

Yeaaaaaaah. I do feel hardcore.
~Music4pumkins Friend~

As a person struggling with cutting and depression, i actually love this poem. it's in my favorites. i dont like that fact that i cut. it makes me hate myself. that self loathing comes out in this poem, but from a difffernt point of view. it makes me think about things from, lets say, my best friend's point of view.
thank you for writing this.

Intense!!! crazy intense!!! i luved it!!